Story Reviews F-J
Fire In The Philippine Sky
By: Robert Glutting
First Name: Aina
Country: Philippines
Beautiful. Alas. I can feel the terror of the Pinatubo eruption…And…you helped me with my LAB REPORT! Thanks a million!
Flowers For The Girl
By: Shane Kennedy
First Name: Karen Ann
Country: Guam
I serve in the US Army. I loved this story. It made soldiers seem like real people. Sometimes the public forgets that. Just real people with hearts that hurt. I would encourage this author to continue writing. He moved me, reminding me who we really are. Thanks so much for this site.
First Name: Sally
Country: United States Of America
This really was a very special story. I enjoyed it from beginning to end. Hurray for the men who go that extra mile to be human beings. I think there are not enough of them, but it is good to be reminded there are some. Thanks for what obviously was a labor of love.
First Name: Melissa
Country: United States Of America
A friend suggested I look at this site. I read the above story. I must say that I enjoyed the story very much. I am wondering if the author is a soldier. As an American, I also enjoyed reading Canadian thoughts, we don't get much of that down here. The story drew me in and kept me wondering. An excellent trait in a story. I think this author has a future. It has been my pleasure to read an early work. I will keep my eye out for more of his work. Thanks for the site, what fun.
Harry The Hermit Crab
By: Angie Ashbery
First Name: Carolyn
Country: United States of America
I enjoyed reading this light-hearted love story. The descriptive writing allowed me to form clear images in my mind. The story left me wanting to know more about the possible relationship between the two characters.
Holiday Blues
By: Barrett Kirghizia
First Name: Memo
Country: United States of America
Good story! Are you "the" BK that attended ESU?
First Name: Christian
Country: United States of America
A brilliant short story about something that I am sure has happened to most of us! Barrett has displayed a rare talent of being funny without being offensive! Please wirte more!
First Name: Susan
Country: United States of America
Glad to see some things are universal. I must say I have watched my share of pictures of London from atop a double decker bus in the rain. This was a very honest and funny story.
If Not For The Cats
By: Linda Hillmen
First Name: Jean
Country: Australia
This story was such fun. I hope the author has it right. Cats should be God. Nothing is a better judge of character. I found the story well written and developed on a very sensible line. This site is highly entertaining. Thanks to both the author and the editor of the site.
If Wibbles Wobbled
By: Dani L.Gustavich
First Name: Katie
Country: United States of America
This author is definitely in touch with their inner child. The poem is a fun and humerous look at the types of questions kids ask every day. I can't wait to read it to my two little cousins. This poem would make a great children's book.
First Name: Manuel
Country: United States of America
Brightened my day…I actually believe that wibbles do wobble!
First Name: Becca
Country: Canada
If only…how true
First Name: Emma
Country: United States of America
Dani's sense of humor and writing style keeps me smiling throughout the entire piece. This is one of those poems that you can read over and over again…so fun!
First Name: Monique
Country: United States of America
I really enjoyed reading "If Wibbles Wobbled", Dani is a VERY talented writer and person.
First Name: Connie
Country: United States of America
I was right! Dani had me laughing and really enjoying her humor! She's so TALENTED! More! More! More!
First Name: Denise
Country: United States of America
LOVE IT!!! *muah*
First Name: Sarah
Country: United States of America
This is so cute! I like it when you read this one on poetry night, but I wish you had some pictures to go along with it! I'll bet the kids where you work love this one! You know, if you were able to turn this one into a book, the whole "wibble" thing could take off. I could just see wibble t-shirts and dolls and I don't even know what a wibble looks like. How do you picture a wibble as looking?
Inspired By Nature
By: Falguni Mukherjee
First Name: Sandy
Country: United States of America
You have painted a vivid portrait of your home's entrance and the plants which thrived there for awhile. I liked the way you tied the lesson on impermanence into such a simple experience we have all had. Celebrate life and beauty while it is with us and let it go when it must change. Thank you.
First Name: Robert
Country: United States of America
It snowed today where I live, yes April 3rd and snowing. I very much enjoyed visiting the authors garden in India. I especially loved the imagery of the hot, dry dusty summer. This author has a way of painting pictures with his words and his love for a plant is something I can truly understand. I have a magnolia tree myself.
First Name: Laura
Country: United States of America
I love to read English used this way. The author turns prose into poetry. Always nice to find a new vision. This author certainly has one, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. More please!
Just Keeps Rolling On
By: Laura Sheridan
First Name: Richard
Country: United States of America
WOW! I've been writing, critiquing and editing four decades and nothing I've ever encountered "cold" has excited me as much as this. Grabbed me from the first few words and absolutely refused to let me go.